I’m a girl, still. Can’t imagine being anything else, although I’ve tried. Empathy is my leader it leads me to lost souls, the underdog. I often lose pieces of myself helping these soul suckers, which most underdogs turn out to be. As well as Empathy i’m hypersensitive for example;
person: “your hair looks nice today”
me: “Oh, thanks!” but what I’m really thinking is, that what they’re really saying is that it looked like crap last time they saw me, you see where I’m going with this?. Is that creativity or just a weird life?
I like simple poetry.
A stream of conciousness.
An alter Ego.
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I can feel the vibe. I like, the tone. If you like, poetry. Come to my blog. It’s not poetry, perhaps. But, I am a critical thinker. Something that, people cannot understand. I like, to keep people in suspicion. Give them, something to look forward to. I also, am a musician. I am a young entrepreneur, C.E.O of Empire Authority. So, I feel, that you would like my blog. So, come check it out.
Thanks,
veloCitY
Thanks, I’m glad someone got IT! I’m checking it out right now. I like the tone too. I like critical thinking, it improves things. Music and words are soulmates
I enjoy your poetry,
Peace,
Laz
Empathy is your leader, it leads you to lost souls? That’s a powerful thought, heavy with implications. It’s late, I need sleep to think better before commenting further. Thanks for reading and leaving a comment at my blog. You’re right: Empathy IS hard to come by. Poor Sad Lonely Human’s.
You’re a very good writer. Your narrative, stream of consciousness voice has an easy, natural flow in both poetry and prose creations. I enjoy your style of writting. You see beneath the surface and you allow your readers to follow you there: but you do it without being too wordy or selfconscious. I don’t know exactly how autobiographical or fictionalized your stories and poems are: but you seem comfortable with yourself and confident of your writing talents. And with good reason. I’m looking forward to reading more of your work. I love Chaotic Love.
I’m thankful for the comment you made on my blog site: “Empathy IS hard to come by. Poor Sad Lonely Human’s. Great Read, I enjoyed your Blog.”
I like to believe it’s a good read, anyway. And I’m glad you enjoyed reading it. I’m never truely satisfied with my writting. It seldom comes out the way I intended. I threw a lot of writing away before I finally realized: that’s the way it works for me.
So I’ve stopped trying to write for myself and started trying to write for the reader. I’m now posting my writing on a blog, hoping to get some reader feedback. I have my best writing ahead of me, I believe. But I’m still going back to rewrite the old stuff until it’s finished: with a beginning, a middle, and an ending. A good ending is the most difficult part to write, for me. I like happy ending. So my stories tend to go on and on looking for one.
Other writers are also hoping for feedback, I realize as I search the WordPress tags. Many writers are concerned about making a living from writing and they are afraid someone is going to steal their ideas or copy their work. I don’t think like that. I’d love to become rich and famous from writing fiction but that’s not what motivates me to write, or to read. I enjoy the creative process: seeing it in others, and finding it in myself.
I probably should have posted everything beyond the first paragraph on my own blog, since it seems to be more about me than you. I didn’t mean for it come out that way. I was attempting to comment in general terms about writing. Feel free to delete it, of course.
just want to say i found u from stephanie santos blog and i like ur poetry. : )
We have a lot in common.
Energy rises
like the sun upon a new
horizon. Glory.
We do have alot in common
Energy,
Sun,
Horizon………glory!
hey Kitty…